Hmm, that is an intriguing piece of artwork, it is as if both boastful and alluring. I like the way you trifle with postmodern art style to the extent it's almost ironic. Yet it is not. Whether you should make something more bold is a question to be asked.
Here's my humble piece of art, though I might not count as a master I'm still quite proud of it.
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/2614/billieboy.jpgI lol'd.
But I think new propaganda is for people who are trying to change NS for what it is. The Third Reich never died, so why change our posters? We make one change and it inplies for more change. Old propaganda or no propaganda.